sounds pretty cool, goodluck with the collab, it looks very interestng...if only i didn't have so much on my plate lol
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ps.. lol sorry. umm try making it a bit longer, sure theres alot more you can conjure and add.
also i read it i feel that more of it should rhyme like the first parah... just needs to lol
have fun =)
Each paragraph rhymes the exact same as another. What are you talking about?
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